Tuesday, June 11, 2013

The stone walls and the iron bars

This one has Capt. Lovelace's most famous lines---Stone walls doe not a prison make,/Nor iron bars a cage;---but the poem has so much more than that: the easy mastery of meter and rhyme, the simple and natural use of refrain, the priamelic structure ...  It's a masterpiece!

Yet it's not my favorite Lovelace poem, I'll post that one later  :)
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To Althea, from Prison

By Richard Lovelace

I.
When love with unconfined wings
        Hovers within my gates;
And my divine Althea brings
        To whisper at the grates;
When I lye tangled in her haire,
        And fetterd to her eye,
The birds, that wanton in the aire,
        Know no such liberty.

II.
When flowing cups run swiftly round
        With no allaying Thames,
Our carelesse heads with roses bound,
        Our hearts with loyal flames;
When thirsty griefe in wine we steepe,
        When healths and draughts go free,
Fishes, that tipple in the deepe,
        Know no such libertie.

III.
When, like committed linnets, I
        With shriller throat shall sing
The sweetnes, mercy, majesty,
        And glories of my King.
When I shall voyce aloud, how good
        He is, how great should be,
Inlarged winds, that curle the flood,
        Know no such liberty.

IV.
Stone walls doe not a prison make,
        Nor iron bars a cage;
Mindes innocent and quiet take
        That for an hermitage;
If I have freedome in my love,
        And in my soule am free,
Angels alone that sore above
        Enjoy such liberty.

Monday, June 10, 2013

Why Lovelace

I'm frustrated  :(  There's this beautiful reading list I brought back from Jim---actually, two beautiful lists, one to read immediately and another to read at leisure during the year---and I can't start reading now, because I do my substantial readings in slow instalments over several days, and because I'll soon be under oath to use German exclusively (which means I wouldn't actually have several days if I started now).

That's why I'm reading Capt. Lovelace, who isn't on either of my lists (which means I can read bits and pieces and then leave him when I want).  I'll be posting his stuff this week.

Here's one:
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To Lucasta, Going Beyond the Seas

By Richard Lovelace

I.
If to be absent were to be
         Away from thee;
    Or that when I am gone,
    You or I were alone;
Then my Lucasta might I crave
Pity from blustring winde, or swallowing wave.

II.
But I'le not sigh one blast or gale
         To swell my saile,
    Or pay a teare to swage
    The foaming blew-Gods rage;
For whether he will let me passe
Or no, I'm still as happy as I was.

III.
Though Seas and Land betwixt us both,
         Our Faith and Troth,
    Like separated soules,
    All time and space controules:
Above the highest sphere wee meet
Unseene, unknowne, and greet as Angels greet.

IV.
So then we doe anticipate
         Our after-fate,
    And are alive i' th' skies,
    If thus our lips and eyes
Can speake like spirits unconfin'd
In Heav'n, their earthy bodies left behind.

Sunday, June 9, 2013

Jim

I wasn't going to blog today, but then I wanted to post this video.  This is my teacher, filmed between my first two summers with him:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vwim-urcspE

Just so yinz know where I'm coming from  :)

Friday, June 7, 2013

So what if it's June

Jim, too, spoke about the odes of Keats this year, which was a curious coincidence  :)  He said the last one (of the six written in 1819) is a poem where Keats attains perfection, so I'm posting that today, even though it's an ode to a different season.

Jim added, though, that perfection is not necessarily a good thing ... but said that this one is a truly great poem:
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To Autumn

By John Keats

Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness!
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eaves run;
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells
With a sweet kernel; to set budding more,
And still more, later flowers for the bees,
Until they think warm days will never cease,
For Summer has o'er-brimm'd their clammy cells.

Who hath not seen thee oft amid thy store?
Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;
Or on a half-reap'd furrow sound asleep,
Drowsed with the fume of poppies, while thy hook
Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers;
And sometime like a gleaner thou dost keep
Steady thy laden head across a brook;
Or by a cider-press, with patient look,
Thou watchest the last oozings, hours by hours.

Where are the songs of Spring? Ay, where are they?
Think not of them, thou hast thy music too.
While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day,
And touch the stubble-plains with rosy hue;
Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn
Among the river sallows, borne aloft
Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;
And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn:
Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft
The redbreast whistles from a garden-croft,
And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.

Thursday, June 6, 2013

Et tu, Ashbery?

Back in Grand Rapids.

Here's another poem I saw for the first time in Iowa, though not in class---it's great to spend some serious time with people who are into poetry!  

And this one's special:  It's by John Ashbery, but---in spite of being by Ashbery---it's crystal clear what's going on and what the point is!  Who'd have thunk of it  :)
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The Instruction Manual

By John Ashbery

As I sit looking out of a window of the building
I wish I did not have to write the instruction manual on the uses of a new metal.
I look down into the street and see people, each walking with an inner peace,  
And envy them—they are so far away from me!
Not one of them has to worry about getting out this manual on schedule.  
And, as my way is, I begin to dream, resting my elbows on the desk and leaning out of the window a little,
Of dim Guadalajara! City of rose-colored flowers!
City I wanted most to see, and most did not see, in Mexico!
But I fancy I see, under the press of having to write the instruction manual,  
Your public square, city, with its elaborate little bandstand!
The band is playing Scheherazade by Rimsky-Korsakov.
Around stand the flower girls, handing out rose- and lemon-colored flowers,  
Each attractive in her rose-and-blue striped dress (Oh! such shades of rose and blue),
And nearby is the little white booth where women in green serve you green and yellow fruit.
The couples are parading; everyone is in a holiday mood.
First, leading the parade, is a dapper fellow
Clothed in deep blue. On his head sits a white hat
And he wears a mustache, which has been trimmed for the occasion.
His dear one, his wife, is young and pretty; her shawl is rose, pink, and white.  
Her slippers are patent leather, in the American fashion,
And she carries a fan, for she is modest, and does not want the crowd to see her face too often.
But everybody is so busy with his wife or loved one
I doubt they would notice the mustachioed man’s wife.
Here come the boys! They are skipping and throwing little things on the sidewalk
Which is made of gray tile. One of them, a little older, has a toothpick in his teeth.
He is silenter than the rest, and affects not to notice the pretty young girls in white.
But his friends notice them, and shout their jeers at the laughing girls.  
Yet soon all this will cease, with the deepening of their years,
And love bring each to the parade grounds for another reason.
But I have lost sight of the young fellow with the toothpick.
Wait—there he is—on the other side of the bandstand,
Secluded from his friends, in earnest talk with a young girl
Of fourteen or fifteen. I try to hear what they are saying
But it seems they are just mumbling something—shy words of love, probably.
She is slightly taller than he, and looks quietly down into his sincere eyes.  
She is wearing white. The breeze ruffles her long fine black hair against her olive cheek.
Obviously she is in love. The boy, the young boy with the toothpick, he is in love too;
His eyes show it. Turning from this couple,
I see there is an intermission in the concert.
The paraders are resting and sipping drinks through straws
(The drinks are dispensed from a large glass crock by a lady in dark blue),  
And the musicians mingle among them, in their creamy white uniforms, and talk
About the weather, perhaps, or how their kids are doing at school.

Let us take this opportunity to tiptoe into one of the side streets.  
Here you may see one of those white houses with green trim  
That are so popular here. Look—I told you!
It is cool and dim inside, but the patio is sunny.
An old woman in gray sits there, fanning herself with a palm leaf fan.  
She welcomes us to her patio, and offers us a cooling drink.  
“My son is in Mexico City,” she says. “He would welcome you too  
If he were here. But his job is with a bank there.
Look, here is a photograph of him.”
And a dark-skinned lad with pearly teeth grins out at us from the worn leather frame.
We thank her for her hospitality, for it is getting late
And we must catch a view of the city, before we leave, from a good high place.
That church tower will do—the faded pink one, there against the fierce blue of the sky. Slowly we enter.
The caretaker, an old man dressed in brown and gray, asks us how long we have been in the city, and how we like it here.
His daughter is scrubbing the steps—she nods to us as we pass into the tower.
Soon we have reached the top, and the whole network of the city extends before us.
There is the rich quarter, with its houses of pink and white, and its crumbling, leafy terraces.
There is the poorer quarter, its homes a deep blue.
There is the market, where men are selling hats and swatting flies
And there is the public library, painted several shades of pale green and beige.
Look! There is the square we just came from, with the promenaders.  
There are fewer of them, now that the heat of the day has increased,  
But the young boy and girl still lurk in the shadows of the bandstand.  
And there is the home of the little old lady—
She is still sitting in the patio, fanning herself.
How limited, but how complete withal, has been our experience of Guadalajara!
We have seen young love, married love, and the love of an aged mother for her son.
We have heard the music, tasted the drinks, and looked at colored houses.  
What more is there to do, except stay? And that we cannot do.
And as a last breeze freshens the top of the weathered old tower, I turn my
gaze
Back to the instruction manual which has made me dream of Guadalajara.

Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Back to the now

Okay, I'm done talking about myself now, I'm posting current poetry again:  Today's poet is so contemporary, she was my classmate at Iowa two years ago  :)

And here's her first book, published less than a year ago!

Here's one of Sally's poems:
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Rain Not Little Bunny

By Sally Delehant

We fell as Peter Rabbit himself,
swaddled in soft repose and upon lettuce beds.  Morning angled
our poem just so, allowed long shadows to swallow its backwood stretches.

                        Hey you.  Did Mr. McGregor sleep well?  Would he like his eggs
coddled and under chandelier light?  We dance the page in a prism, go lippity—
lippity— not very fast, I harang you from my barstool, slutting up the joint.

                        Hey ho.  This is happenstance, a remembering of pinball shaken rain.
We know a couple who forgives through a storm as their son cries outside the
            bedroom door—
not a sparrow to save him.  This is the practicality of the story

and this is what we told our playmates, twelve times twelve.
The two dogs slurped spaghetti.  At the end of the meal, the Tramp nosed the last
            meatball toward her.
Our waitress picks up a fallen fork—

                                                two ears now visible on her lower back.  She’s stamped.
We want to induce a snuggle.  We want to reduce our waist size and wink.  Our tales
sally forth, we touch undercover.  We flare like this.

Monday, June 3, 2013

More stuff from Friday

So my reading list for the next year includes---in addition to Shakespeare's sonnets (of which I posted one on Friday)---Robert Burns; Robert Frost for ear training in iambic pentameter; Emily Dickinson for her use of rhyme and silences  ...  :)  

I'm excited that Jim talked to me about the use of silence, because I know from Photography classes that you have to have made some progress before you can start looking at negative space, as used consciously and systematically by, say, Brett Weston.

And iambic pentameter has a distinctive sound---which contributes, for example, to the grandeur of Milton (his politics notwithstanding), see the poem I'm posting today---and still sounds different in every new pair of hands.  I'm hoping my ear training with Robert Frost will be effective ...  In case I end up sounding anything like this poem below, I get to finally send Jim that postcard he spoke of two years ago---I haven't forgotten about that  :)
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On the late Massacher in Piemont

By John Milton

Avenge O Lord thy slaughterʼd Saints, whose bones
Lie scatterʼd on the Alpine mountains cold,
Evʼn them who kept thy truth so pure of old
When all our Fathers worshipʼt Stocks and Stones,
Forget not: in thy book record their groanes
Who were thy Sheep and in their antient Fold
Slayn by the bloody Piemontese that rollʼd
Mother with Infant down the Rocks.  Their moans
The Vales redoublʼd to the Hills, and they
To Heavʼn.  Their martyrʼd blood and ashes sow
Oʼre all thʼ Italian fields where still doth sway
The triple Tyrant: that from these may grow
A hunderʼd-fold, who having learnt thy way
Early may fly the Babylonian wo.