Monday, April 8, 2013

What happens in London?

Let's see how the narrative moves in town:
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6:16 p.m.  Chapter 38 is just 3 pages  :(

6:17 p.m.  Frowny face because its brevity probably means Elizabeth doesn't hook up with Darcy in this chapter.

6:21 p.m.  Collins is a treasure where comedy is called for  :)  But he's now spent half my chapter telling Elizabeth what she missed out on when she denied his suit!

6:24 p.m.  A soliloquy yesterday, an aside today  :)

6:26 p.m.  Done.  No hookup  :(  How's this even a pre-Victorian novel?!  More tomorrow (maybe something will happen tomorrow)

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