Driving (in
this weather!) to Ann Arbor to pick up my daughter. Today’s sonnet:
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CL
O! from what power hast thou this powerful
might,
With insufficiency my heart to sway?
To make me give the lie to my true sight,
And swear that brightness doth not grace the
day?
Whence hast thou this becoming of things ill,
That in the very refuse of thy deeds
There is such strength and warrantise of
skill,
That, in my mind, thy worst all best exceeds?
Who taught thee how to make me love thee
more,
The more I hear and see just cause of hate?
O! though I love what others do abhor,
With others thou shouldst not abhor my state:
If thy unworthiness rais'd love in me,
More worthy I to be belov'd of thee.
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Antonym
pairs again, which—again J—work as turns, simply
by being antonym pairs. One in the first
quatrain (lie/true), one in the second quatrain (worst/best), and one in
lines 9–10 (love/hate). Followed by the volta
marker though in the next line, but I
think the main volta would be the if in
the Shakespearean position.
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