I’ll do
double blogs for another week J before slowing down for the semester. Here’s this morning’s sonnet:
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CXXV
Were't aught to me I bore the canopy,
With my extern the outward honouring,
Or laid great bases for eternity,
Which proves more short than waste or
ruining?
Have I not seen dwellers on form and favour
Lose all and more by paying too much rent
For compound sweet; forgoing simple savour,
Pitiful thrivers, in their gazing spent?
No; let me be obsequious in thy heart,
And take thou my oblation, poor but free,
Which is not mix'd with seconds, knows no
art,
But mutual render, only me for thee.
Hence, thou suborned informer! a true soul
When most impeach'd, stands least in thy
control.
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The turn with
the no at the Petrarchan position is
pretty prominent, and the two turns with but
in lines 10 and 12 are pretty much the point of the poem, but the point is
stated even better in the final line with its superlatives. Another one in the afternoon.
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