I think I’ll
again go to two sonnets a day for the break
J Here’s the second one for today:
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CIII
Alack! what poverty my Muse brings forth,
That having such a scope to show her pride,
The argument, all bare, is of more worth
Than when it hath my added praise beside!
O! blame me not, if I no more can write!
Look in your glass, and there appears a face
That over-goes my blunt invention quite,
Dulling my lines, and doing me disgrace.
Were it not sinful then, striving to mend,
To mar the subject that before was well?
For to no other pass my verses tend
Than of your graces and your gifts to tell;
And more, much more, than in my verse can
sit,
Your own glass shows you when you look in
it.
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I’m thinking
the more worth at the end of line 3
is the main turn in this one. The other
turns—such as the over-goes in line 7—pretty
much just repeat the first one. Maybe
the for at the beginning of line 11
is another turn, but it’s spelling out what’s already been assumed in the
previous lines. More tomorrow—
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