Sunday, December 29, 2013

Smiling on Sunday evening

FINALLY  J  All six of my Fall grades are in, and I got straight A’s  J  Here’s sonnet 113:
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CXIII

  Since I left you, mine eye is in my mind;
  And that which governs me to go about
  Doth part his function and is partly blind,
  Seems seeing, but effectually is out;
  For it no form delivers to the heart
  Of bird, of flower, or shape which it doth latch:
  Of his quick objects hath the mind no part,
  Nor his own vision holds what it doth catch;
  For if it see the rud'st or gentlest sight,
  The most sweet favour or deformed'st creature,
  The mountain or the sea, the day or night:
  The crow, or dove, it shapes them to your feature.
    Incapable of more, replete with you,
    My most true mind thus maketh mine untrue.
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The first turns are the and in line 3 and the but in line 4, setting up the idea of oxymorons that runs through the whole poem.  Count the number of negative auxiliaries  J  and antonym pairs, including the superlatives in lines 9–10.  The main volta is very late:  It’s the thus in the final line, between the final pair most true and untrue, emphasizing the last oxymoron.  More tomorrow—

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