Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Seeing things

Reflecting upon chapters I and II, I think I might be beginning to discern some patterns in the book  :)  but today I'm planning to get the reading (and the log) done fast, so here goes:
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5:08 p.m.  Chapter III is 21 pages.

5:16 p.m.  Okay, he's serious about similes.  He's also getting seriously close to finally showing us Gatsby.  I'm curious to see whether he introduces a new hook when he does that.

5:40 p.m.  Also does metonymy and anticlimax, and does them well  :)

5:43 p.m.  Plus he's telling his own story, too!  It's unbelievable how well-written this is.

5:50 p.m.  Done  :)  Last point:  No loose threads in this book, not even casual ones!  One the other hand, he feels free to pick up a deceptively minor-looking thread fifty pages later.  And he makes a virtue of it!   And yes, he did introduce a new hook.

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