Thursday, September 27, 2012

Under hundred

So I managed to write a piece in 99 words today  :)  Part of the reason may be that I want to get in a little extra sleep tonight (before taking that giant test in my rhetoric class tomorrow).  At any rate:
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Blink

Open your eyes on the open sand. 

Now look to your left, and look to your right, and look ahead a little (between your oversized legs), and maybe even look upwards (lifting your shoulders off the sand)  (leaning your head back into the sand).  In twelve directions the sand rises steep.

The sand is (orange is) the belly of a mare in heat, but the open top, way up where, is (blue is) water on the verge of falling into the sand, of falling on your head.  It moved, so shut you eyes.

And peek, and watch it ebb.

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