Thursday, October 17, 2013

Volta project, day 25

Here’s sonnet 25:
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XXV

  Let those who are in favour with their stars
  Of public honour and proud titles boast,
  Whilst I, whom fortune of such triumph bars
  Unlook'd for joy in that I honour most.
  Great princes' favourites their fair leaves spread
  But as the marigold at the sun's eye,
  And in themselves their pride lies buried,
  For at a frown they in their glory die.
  The painful warrior famoused for fight,
  After a thousand victories once foil'd,
  Is from the book of honour razed quite,
  And all the rest forgot for which he toil'd:
  Then happy I, that love and am belov'd,
  Where I may not remove nor be remov'd.
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In brief:  Lines 1–2 are expanded upon in lines 5–12 (the public honour in the third quatrain and the proud titles in the second quatrain— a sophisticated chiasmus  J) and lines 3–4 in the closing couplet.  I’ll call the then at the beginning of line 13 the volta.  More tomorrow!

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